What I think about my Oral Presentation?¿

Ok, In the first viewpoint, I think it's OK to use a PowerPoint and a lot of transitions, but I could think a bit more and bring the keybord near the screen... I've got my back on you all the time...

The time it's Ok, it's in the middle way between 5 and 7 minutes...

I think it's ok to move and don't be quiet all the time... but also I think it's really strange to move the head right and left all the time... I'll resolve my head's problem for the next Presentation!

Yes, I read some times, but It's not a thing which I abused a lot...

I made a change in the intonation in the  2:11 min. to awaken the public attention, then, the people took interest in what I was saying...

I laughed a bit because I was really nervous, but I think it's only a practice affair...

I organized the structure a bit strange but then I resolved why I was speaking about this things...

I think the content isn't really overcomplicated because it's a topic which somebody knows it, but also it's interesting for the audience, and to explain why I 'm interested in this world of the Informatics...

The language is not really difficult, so all could understand me, but I introduced interesting words for example "cheat", "engage", "like a chain"... which gave me security in what I was saying...

I think the pronunciation could be better, sure of that! But it wasn't wrong and I think it's normally in my english level.

I think it could be a 6.5 over 10. It's not bad but it could be better...